2003年12月27日四六级作文参考范文及点评

Part V Writing
Directions: In this section you are required to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1．建议报考的专业及理由；
2．报考该专业的基本条件；
3．应当如何备考。

A Letter of Reply to a Friend
December 27, 2003
Dear
When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English. To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on. What’s more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.
In order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements. In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. In the second place, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary, because they are the foundations for your future study. Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.”
As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary. In addition, you’d better spend some time on reading and writing. Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university. (193 words)
Yours
字数有些过多。同学们写135词左右即可。本文的连接词非常重要，起到穿针引线的作用。另外，主语从句，定语从句，状语从句，虚拟语气，举例，倒装，引用谚语，承上启下的用法等都是重点。你看，用上了这些东西，自己再加一些简单句，就可以很容易地写出好文章。
2003年12月27日六级写作范文
 
Part V Writing
Directions: In this section you are required to write a composition on the topic “Reduce Waste on Campus”. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1． 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重；
2． 浪费的危害；
3． 从我做起，杜绝浪费。

Reduce Waste on Campus
As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.
The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. If they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.
As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What’s more, I’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus. (196 words)
 

 
 
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