here are some good examples of writings！ NO 。1

the five basises in a writing task
· ognization
· relevance
· vocabulery
· spelling
grammer/sentence structures
here are some good examples
(all of them got 9 points in the Writing Task)

1.
the chart shows the numbers of hours of leisure enjoyed by men and women in a tipical week in 1998 -9,according to gender and employment status.

among those employed full-time,men on average had fifty hours of leisure,wherears women had approximately thirty-seven hours.there were no figures given for male part-time workers,but female part-timers had forty hours of leisure time,only slightly more than women in full-time employment,perhaps reflecting their works in the home.

in the unempolyed and retired categories,leisure time showed an increase for both sexes,as might have been expected.here too,men enjoyed more leisure time--over eighty hours,compared with sevently hours for women,perhaps once again,reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than men.

lastly,housewives enjoyed approximately fifty--four hours of leisure,on average.there were no figures given for househusbands! overall,the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which stastics on male leisure time wee avaiable,men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra leisure time.