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Could you find out the errors here?

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更多 发布于:2002-11-24 15:11
English Corner should include many things. It is not only to communicate the way of reciting words or the experience of passing examination.
Sometimes, you may feel that you really want to express your feeling in English because English is very charming at special time.
So, why not writing your story in English here? And everyone of us can make proofreading and error correcting here.
Ok?
Could you find out the errors here?
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发布于:2002-11-24 15:27
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
  i see, i understand you, but sometimes our atmosphere is not fit your sugguestion!

  i really want it goes that way , and i have tried severly times  and always reward with my        dissatisfactory !

  how come here ,how i go!!!??? --------------------                     多看看,  多听听!
多看看, 多听听!
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发布于:2002-11-24 15:29
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
Right,good suggestion!But,first,you should make youself clear.
I am a little bit confused about your goal here.Do you want us to find errors in your sentences?
-------------------- 一双很冷的眼!
一双很冷的眼!
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发布于:2002-11-24 20:47
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
i am not a local residant of beijing,
in beijing, i have to express myself in "普通话"
then i can express many things which i can't with my dialect.
english is the same thing.
in english,
you can express more things you can't easily in "普通话"
that is it.
come on everyone!
better, better, better...
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发布于:2002-11-24 23:09
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
yes, i couldn't -------------------- 任我不行  孤独求奶
昨夜小楼又春风 美人宽衣我不行
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发布于:2002-11-25 17:40
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
What a positive fool!
天下之大, 无奇不有。 hotdog, 来吼一吼。
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发布于:2002-11-25 17:40
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
yes, i couldn't

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任我不行  孤独求奶

you should say "yes, i can" or "no, i cannot"
why you think that you cannot?
just do it, then you will find that you really can.
I believe you, why not give yourself a chance?
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发布于:2002-11-25 17:46
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
"普通话"

it is called mandarin
:)
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发布于:2002-11-26 22:08
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
yes u are right!!:smile: --------------------
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发布于:2002-11-27 19:03
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
What a positive fool!

what do you mean?
don't you want to change BIGC a little before you leave?
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发布于:2002-11-27 23:37
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
no, i  could.:mess2: -------------------- 任我不行  孤独求奶
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发布于:2002-11-28 18:01
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
no, i  could.:mess2:

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任我不行  孤独求奶

you made the same mistake, guy!
read my last answer to you carefully and you will get the right idea.:)
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发布于:2002-12-03 14:54
Re:Could you find out the errors here?

what do you mean?
don't you want to change BIGC a little before you leave?

the name is not really important ,  ourselves are indeed!!!   --------------------                     多看看,  多听听!
多看看, 多听听!
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发布于:2002-12-03 22:36
Re:Could you find out the errors here?

the name is not really important ,  ourselves are indeed!!!  

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                     多看看,  多听听!

I agree with you. Let's help each other.
and thank you for your support.
Which department are you in?
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发布于:2002-12-05 16:05
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
:icon_smile:You are so kind. I'm very glad to meet such a "you" .It is hard to do everything especially to do this thing in our school.
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发布于:2002-12-07 19:04
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
:icon_smile:You are so kind. I'm very glad to meet such a "you" .It is hard to do everything especially to do this thing in our school.

If every one think it is hard, it will really be hard.
But in fact, it is easy. We are all on the way, aren't we?
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发布于:2002-12-08 23:24
Re:Could you find out the errors here?

you made the same mistake, guy!
read my last answer to you carefully and you will get the right idea.:)

老说我:icon_smile_angry:
i不跟u好了:icon_smile_dead::icon_smile_dead::icon_smile_dead:
-------------------- 任我不行  孤独求奶
昨夜小楼又春风 美人宽衣我不行
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发布于:2002-12-09 18:01
Re:Could you find out the errors here?

老说我:icon_smile_angry:
i不跟u好了:icon_smile_dead::icon_smile_dead::icon_smile_dead:


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任我不行  孤独求奶

I am confident that I will praise you one day.
But I have to criticize you now:
can't you see that we all communicate in English? Why do you speak Chinese,my dear baby? It is English Corner.
Try your best.
I believe you can do, you can do, you can do do do
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发布于:2002-12-11 22:18
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
I came here to support English Corner, to show that I am really trying.
I believe.
好惨啊,同志们支持一下吧!
英语角的浏览人数这么少......
不像一个有英语系的院校!!! [ 2002-12-11 22:23:36 Amy917 修改 ]
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发布于:2003-05-25 10:12
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
I'm  very  moved .
I'VE  NEVER   COME  HERE ,IT'S  A  PITY!
WHEN  SOMEBODAY  TALKING  ABOUT  ENGLISH,I  JUST   SAY  A WORD——MY EMGLISH  IS  VERY  POOR.
I  WANT  TO  CHANGE  IT,BUT   I  DONG'T  KNOW  HOW  TO  START.I  THINK  I  WILL  COME   HERE  (频繁的)。
YOU  SEE,MY  ENGLISH  IS  POOR.IN  THE  WORD  MUST  BE  LOTS  OF  EORROR.
I  HOPE   YOU  CAN  UNDERSTAND  MY  WORDS.

:D
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发布于:2003-06-07 19:38
Re:Could you find out the errors here?
I'm  very  moved .
I'VE  NEVER   COME  HERE ,IT'S  A  PITY!
WHEN  SOMEBODAY  TALKING  ABOUT  ENGLISH,I  JUST   SAY  A WORD——MY EMGLISH  IS  VERY  POOR.
I  WANT  TO  CHANGE  IT,BUT   I  DONG'T  K..

Oh yes .I understand   you  ,First ,I think you can came here suggest that you are trying to inprove
your English,that's a good (动力)!(how to say the word ,is there anybody can help me ?thanks )
second,don't afraid  to  make mistake !   we can catch up one day !  come on !


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